A small sample from an actual written report:
…you built well from a set construction point of view, and also with a little more energy as the set went on. Avoid “speaking of” as a phrase on stage, your writing is strong enough that you don’t need an excuse or permission to launch into a new subject. Good pacing and confident delivery. The 3 siblings, 5 kinds joke is great. Good personal connection to your material. There are elements of your showcase that could use refining, including… (cont.)
What your feedback session includes:
You will get a comprehensive report card on your video submission with notes for each of the 25 scoring criteria, as well as a written report. The written report will include specific feedback and suggestions, as well as a timeline of your set, which highlights the positive and negative elements in your performance.
